Sirena

[Fire Sirena]

I hope I put this in the right place. I am not sure the race is acceptable because it was on non-playable and on playable list.
Name: Sirena
Age: 25
Gender: female
Race: Sirin / Werewolf (red)
Class/Rank: Knight
Abilities: turn people in to werewolfs, fire is and ice are not very effective, and can make claws hotter to burn as well as wound.
Personality: Split personalities. One is very kind and looks to help people and one very mean that likes to see harm done to people. The kind one is always willing to help. The not kind one has a bandit/wander attitude.
Appearance: Black cloak thing when not in battle (roaming). In battle has black torn up cloths on (shorts and t-shirt). Also short about 5 foot.
Weapon/Magic: Long Sword, Flail,claws
History: I new knight in the community and highly underestimated for shortness and gender. A drifter but feel at home some times in Hluff and in the area on Hluff. Not much is known about her, she some times wonders away from hluff area.
Oh yea please find me around Hluff's wilderness.

edit: I guess I can only be a solider

[Treijim]

Thanks Scraverx. Okay, flamingclaws. There are a few things to fix here, but it's a good character overall.

Firstly, The name of your post should be the name of your character. It's just easier that way. Was Fire Claw your character's name? It sounds like a rank. Sirins generically have four letter names like Rece, Nari, Tern, Lara, etc. The name isn't a big issue though.

I'll allow for your Sirin to be a soldier, but I highly recommend a Sirin class, which is under 'other classes' in the class list. If you're a soldier and you go to do soldier duties, humans will hate you. All humans hate Sirins. As a Sirin Guard, you need only guard the town of Hluff and fellow Sirins would not pick on you.

Your abilities are good. I've never been game enough to make a Sirin that uses fire magic, since Sirins are coated in fur and there is a chance of them burning themself. It's still acceptable though.