Post by memoricprism on Aug 27, 2007 0:28:40 GMT 9.5
I'm experimenting now, to see if the opening can make any sense.
I hope it does, if it doesn't I'll try even harder.
‘I need new clothes.’ Haing walked over near the lake and dove his entire arm inside of it. He quickly wiped his brow, spreading mud all over his face to contrast the white on his body. He hastily jerked up his belt of his pants while doing so, spreading mud all over his trousers.
He looked at his belt, adjusting it; he placed the dagger hold in the middle of his waist. He sighed and looked up at the lake. It reflected the quickly darkening sky above. His eyes darted closer to the water to look at his own reflection.
‘A wasted individual that seems to have no right to live.’ His pants began to slip again, he hastily jerked them up once more and tied a random broken piece of string to it so that it may stop the falling.
‘What the heck.’ He threw a pebble into the water to distort his image. Everything was affected but his eyes. Which glared at him the entire time. Still angered with his eyes looking at him so angrily, he waded into the water at near-chest level.
Thank you.
I hope it does, if it doesn't I'll try even harder.
‘I need new clothes.’ Haing walked over near the lake and dove his entire arm inside of it. He quickly wiped his brow, spreading mud all over his face to contrast the white on his body. He hastily jerked up his belt of his pants while doing so, spreading mud all over his trousers.
He looked at his belt, adjusting it; he placed the dagger hold in the middle of his waist. He sighed and looked up at the lake. It reflected the quickly darkening sky above. His eyes darted closer to the water to look at his own reflection.
‘A wasted individual that seems to have no right to live.’ His pants began to slip again, he hastily jerked them up once more and tied a random broken piece of string to it so that it may stop the falling.
‘What the heck.’ He threw a pebble into the water to distort his image. Everything was affected but his eyes. Which glared at him the entire time. Still angered with his eyes looking at him so angrily, he waded into the water at near-chest level.
Thank you.
